When

When

When the party is over
Dishes piled high
Left overs scattered
I am alone.

When  kisses, hugs,goodbyes
Are memory
I feel most alone
I am alone.

I think I miss you most
When the quiet hits
It’s reality
I am alone.

When all is said and done
For all I know
I just don’t know
Who you might be.

A strange thought to be sure
I think you’re there
I just don’t know where!
Geez too deep for me!

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10 thoughts on “When”

  1. Hi Chris…on the one hand “When” seems kind of sad. But I guess I read something else there, and it made me smile.

    “I just don’t know
    Who you might be.”

    That statement is so full of promise and potential. And excitement.
    🙂

    1. Hi Colleen…it was a little sad when everyone left but I too smiled at that. Of course I probably should be looking but I guess the Good Lord is going to have to drop whoever he is in my lap LOL

  2. Beautiful poem… I really got the emotion and sadness behind it… we are all alone at some point in our lives. 🙂
    Finally catching up on comments after my busy time with my college bound kids.
    Eliz

  3. Geeze! too deep for my mind too !!

    I know when I’m feeling alone-I find that concentrating on these thoughts “can at times be so overwhelming” but I have learned-“the hard way”-the best to get past this is to get busy !! and I mean get busy ! go for a stroll, anything to get my mind on other thoughts-and before I know it-my mind is back on tract with creativity and a desire to move on. 🙂

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